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Uploaded
Oct 8, 2010 | 7:15 PM EDT
File Info
Loop
1.6 MB
1 min 23 sec
Score
3.89 / 5.00

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 3.89 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
632 Plays | 39 Downloads
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern
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Author Comments

This is my very first song and I am making a melody to it later in the full song! This is a W.I.P soo take it easy on me!

Please give meh some advice to make even better songs!
If you wanna collab... message me and we'll work something out.

TooSwag

Reviews


DaveGuyDaveGuy

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

good first hiphop song.

Seeing as it's your first song, I'm not going to give too much concrit, but i will tell you some basics:

give it a melody to top the bassline
add some stuff in the background and foreground
fix the kick drum to make it sound louder

for a simple beat, it has a good song arrangement: intro, buildup, bass comes in, etc...
for now, I wouldn't worry too much about fixing this song up because it's only your first.

How to get better:
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what happened with me is that I got new melody ideas which transformed into songs once at the keyboard and I never envision the entire song in my head then make it, always starts with a single melody idea either ranging from lead melodies to just a simple bassline. I discovered & experimented with different aspects of the music production program, I watched youtube tutorials and learned new effect techniques, and I asked newgrounders.

I'm excited to see stuff from you in the future :)
~DjDO~



DesknightDesknight

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Just not "special"

This is good, but it really isn't a song. It's more like a little background music loop in a cartoon.

This is great but it's still only your simple first, everyone starts somewhere.
3/5
7/10


TooSwag responds:

Alright thanks its the first loop i've ever made so its a start. And thanks again