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Oct 8, 2010 | 7:15 PM EDT
File Info
1.6 MB
1 min 23 sec
3.89 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 3.89 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
632 Plays | 39 Downloads
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Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern

Author Comments

This is my very first song and I am making a melody to it later in the full song! This is a W.I.P soo take it easy on me!

Please give meh some advice to make even better songs!
If you wanna collab... message me and we'll work something out.




Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

good first hiphop song.

Seeing as it's your first song, I'm not going to give too much concrit, but i will tell you some basics:

give it a melody to top the bassline
add some stuff in the background and foreground
fix the kick drum to make it sound louder

for a simple beat, it has a good song arrangement: intro, buildup, bass comes in, etc...
for now, I wouldn't worry too much about fixing this song up because it's only your first.

How to get better:
what happened with me is that I got new melody ideas which transformed into songs once at the keyboard and I never envision the entire song in my head then make it, always starts with a single melody idea either ranging from lead melodies to just a simple bassline. I discovered & experimented with different aspects of the music production program, I watched youtube tutorials and learned new effect techniques, and I asked newgrounders.

I'm excited to see stuff from you in the future :)


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Just not "special"

This is good, but it really isn't a song. It's more like a little background music loop in a cartoon.

This is great but it's still only your simple first, everyone starts somewhere.

TooSwag responds:

Alright thanks its the first loop i've ever made so its a start. And thanks again