Great feel - minor issues
As a whole, the song is really cool. However, the 1/16th note bass kicks at the beginning seemed so out of place, and the drum transition right around 1 minute was too abrupt.
The delay on the lead really sounded cool, especially with the slides. However, the notes you played bounced around a lot, and some sort of structure would have gone along nicely with the mellow feel of the song
Anywhoski, I enjoyed it and now I'm gonna go check out some more of your stuff.
Very constructive criticism! I'm working on some new mellow songs as we speak. These comments help! Thank you! Also my songs do have a lot of abrubt changes. I like to think of them as deceptive cadences.
Sit back and take a dream trip through the mushroom forest.
One could and dose drift of into lala land listing to this
wonderful piece of music.
Max scorers from me.
Thanks man. My songs are here to be loved and enjoyed. Download this one and bump it when your having a rough day :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.