Hmm
Well right off the bat the song sounded just awesome, and the build up was great, but I think it fell into the false build up category, where not enough happened really and it just kinda felt like it wasn't really warranted. After that you added some really interesting sounds around 1:30 and those all seemed appropriate. When the bass came in finally the song sounded complete.
You added some really strange effects around here that didn't sound very musical at all and just sound awkward. I would highly suggest taking those out...I'm not even sure what that noise is (like 1:20 for example), but the rest of the beat is great. I'd remove that super weird shit, everything else sounds great.
Oh, and nice job trying to make it loop, lol. It doesn't work perfectly, but good enough for me. Honestly, with some touching up, I would have no problem giving this a 10. I just see some obvious problems with it. Keep up the good work though, I like your sound.