It's your second one, and you make me believe you got enough potential to get very good writing songs.
I found it a little bit repetitive, but you're able to make good beats and melodies, when it's repetitive you can put some FM / filters frequency and resonance / Feedback / or whatever. Try Reason4 if you never did, it's what I use, you write your own loops and get the sound you want. There is a lot of possibilities with this program, i'm still learning a lot about it.
And thanx for the review on my songs Mario world and Pop it!
Hope you make some more stuff! I'll look for that!
Hey thanks sebastien01! I'll seriously take that into account next time. I'm learning a lot from your songs too! So keep em' coming! haha
It sounds like you made this with a loop program. Very bland, generic song.
If you want to make a better song, make a melody or add some custom, non-consistant samples that you mix and match by chopping into pieces and re-arranging the pieces, instead of using the same sample for the main sound over and over.
Lol that was the point of the song! It was supposed to be repetitive! I stated that in my comments. :)
Though, when I start doing another genre of music, I'll take those tips into account. I appreciate the criticism.