not bad- very atmospheric.
It's a nice tune, lovely and floaty and atmospheric. That's about it though- it makes it a bit of a filler. I kept expecting it to break down and then come in with a big catchy chorus but when the chorus came it was pretty average..
Still, on the plus side, catchy is often very close to annoying so you've avoided that pitfall.
I think also, the sounds in the tune all kinda merge together a bit on the same frequency. Decent separation would make the hats sit cleaner on the top and the bass rumble underneath a lot more.
Be nice to hear some more original samples in there too- just to make it sound more original.
On the whole though, it is a good tune, well produced and arranged, just lacks a killer hook imho.
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I don't really get into trance as much as I did when I was younger, but it's obviously an amazing trance song. I think the melodies you used were all very appropriate and the build-ups were amazing =)
I guess the only criticism I could think to give you is that it all blends so well that it sounds repetitive and kinda boring without anything standing out, but maybe that's the sound you were going for, lol. Everything is blended extremely well together and all the transitions are very smooth. Not my style anymore, but props on pulling it off.
I suppose I could have thrown in something that would stand out really well, like a fart or something...XD
In all seriousness though, the only sound I was going for was something kind of light and airy...and it's easy to blend airiness after airiness into more airiness, so perhaps that's how the song became one big marshmallow without any chocolate chips or otherwise. (Sorry, I tend to get overly metaphorical.) So, in short, I get what you mean. ; )
Thanks for the review!
music can never reach the point of perfection
I think this song is wonderful and professional just the way it is. It's filled with energy and passion! ^.^
Music will never reach the point of perfection, but its worth a shot. SO KEEP DOING SONGS LIKE THIS AND NOT THOSE DAMN PENIS, PENIS, PENIS, POO, NOT SO SERIOUS SONGS! CAUSE YOU GOT SO MUCH TO GIVE DAMNIT!
PS. Do not take this review badly or anything, i do love your music. This song is a perfect example to why i love your songs! :3
What? You don't appreciate the deeper philosophical meanings of PENIS PENIS PENIS POO!?! XD
Anyway, I completely understand what you mean. I'm never really proud of those potty-humor spam songs, it's just what happens when I get stuck and desperate. Hopefully I'll be more active now that I've broken the wall of block! :D
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