I liked your control of dynamics. Made everything sound very smooth and go together. Good choice of instrumentation, too. My only gripe is that the background percussion (bass drum, snare, hi-hat, etc) sounded like it wasn't immersed in the music. Kinda as if it stood apart. As in, it wasn't loud enough (at least that's part of it). Also, it gets pretty repetitive after a while, before even the halfway mark.
Still, I liked it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.