Repetitive, even for electronica
I liked the sound itself but it was very repetitive with not enough variation. One of the challenges of techno music is to evolve the repetitive beats to make it interesting while still making it sound good when you're not really listening (hence, ambient).
Try varying your beat structure and including more contrasting melodies. I liked the transitions near the end from the main sound to the 'space music' sound.
The beats in the very beginning are laborious and should be removed.
Keep writing music!
Mhmmm...your criticizm is tolerated. Well I like the beats in the beginning so ha. And you're saying it's repetitive? I disagree. I don't wanna sound like an idiot but excuse me, you are the one to talk? You have no music so how can you judge MY music? I'm sorry for that. Thanks for at least some constructive criticizm unlike all these idiots saying "FUK U DIE U BIZNITCH DIS SUXX DIK!!!" Okay I'm done talking now........