The music is great! The instruments are something you should change possibly. If you want a nice guitar VST, try Ministry of Rock by East West.
Overall, the song is quite enjoyable and if you keep at it, you will be a pro in no time.
Wow. Coming from you that this is quite an honor...
I will definitely check out that guitar VST, cause' I'm sure that you know your stuff when it comes to synths.
Thank you very much for the review I hope to create much in the future!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.