I really enjoyed it, but it's just missing that.....oomph....you know? You've got something great here, you just need that missing piece. Makes me want to make music now.
That is all.
It interests me that you find this interesting.
I play bass too, and I'm damn good at it :3
But feels like something is missing maybe it's just me.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.