Dj Lithorph - Something [WiP]

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hey there newgrounds.
A song im working on, instead of just voting 0 and 5, give me a review on whats good/bad, what i should change, what ishould do. I know this isn't a complete song but im kinda stuck and i could do with some help from the musicgeniouses from newgrounds.
Thanks in advance //Lithorph

ps. My headset is f-ed so ive got a crappy one without any bass so the mastering might be fail


9 stars because...

you think you need help with this? Sounds to me like you are on the right track. Great song, pianos ftw and love the quick lead filter fill at 0:40 if that makes sense? lol.

Add onto it, make over the 3min mark and I will give a 10 upon resubmission :)

PS. More of the beeptune (404?) is required...maybe with piano over the top for the final minute of your song?

Lithorph responds:

Haha thanks for your review, I do know that this song has some potential, but its not good yet, it needs to be worked on but i haven't really gotten anything done in 3 weeks. Also the part where someone said my piano melody sounded exactly the same as the intro to (ekowraith - waiting for tonight) and i cant really say it doesnt. Anyways i dont know if ill work on this or not, we'll see.

Not bad.

At first I thought.. "Heard this generic melody a thousand times before"
However, I like what you have going at 0:40. You should really work on that melody :)

PS: I know what you mean with the annoying "no reason zero-bombers" - should get sodomized by a retractable baton :p

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Lithorph responds:

Haha yeah xD Ill try to work on the melody, and maybe make the sample a little more interesting.

Catch 5!!

By me :)

Lithorph responds:

Lololol, nice try redeeming yourself.

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4.42 / 5.00

Sep 30, 2010
9:05 AM EDT
File Info
2.6 MB
1 min 9 sec

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