You're lucky that i even lowered myself to review this, because im no fan of trance.
only really good melodic trance.
Anyways, the start was good.
The kick seems too cliche, and its the FL Kick.
Its the standard snare drum as well.
The standard sounds make me cry.
Melodic - It got some melodies to stick to, increasing it score.
The bass was some times out of order, and created dissonance.
Constructive Critism only, If you feel like going to my songs and voting 0 on em all, i dont really mind as i've stopped producing for NG :p