Ocean Life

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Please drop me a review, I really need them, trance is not my best style :)
It's also one of the only ways that I can improve it too.
Edit: Done some adjustments, made the clap more present and some arrangement editting.



this is really great, its got a really ketchy tune and a impresive beat, it really makes you get into the song... 5/5 10/10 :)

Nice job!

Really digging the melodies. Nice, full sounds as well. The bass is punchy without being omnipresent, and I like that hi hat. What I would say you need to work on the most are your buildups. At 1:24, the song was off and running before I even realized it. If you tease your listeners a little more, it'll make that kick entrance all the more satisfying. Also, when you seem to take a breather from 2:19 to 3:01, I think there needs to be some percussive presence there. In my (very) humble opinion, trance is a genre that should keep your head bobbing the whole way through, and part of that is having a kick, hi hat, snare, clap, mousetrap, something that audibly keeps the beat. The crescendo that kicks in at 3:01 is a good effort, but it's a little wussy for my taste, mainly because that snare is weaksauce. It doesn't cut through like I'd expect.

Last teensy criticism: this song has a lot of high voicing without a low counterbalance. I can hear your bassline, but it's about 2 octaves too high. You've got plenty on the high side as it is. Drop some of that stuff down and you've got yourself a winner.

You've got the foundation for a great song here. Just give it a little more attention. 3/5 7/10

Chamon responds:

Sure will edit some of the things you've said. Tomorrow, I'll make a whole new arrangement. Thanks alot for the review :)

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4.22 / 5.00

Sep 27, 2010
4:11 PM EDT
File Info
7.8 MB
5 min 41 sec

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