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Hell's Corridors

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This should be used in the hell part of a game if I made it any good. Which I hope I did, but I want you guys to tell me what things I did wrong.

Also: In the idea of hell that I made it for, it is mostly quiet and creepy, as it's filled mainly with evil ghosts and not much torturing.

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More like Purgatory rather than hell :P

The sound you created captures more of a mystic type of place, like how somebody is lost trying to find there way out of the mysterious maze. It does not have that much of a dark and scarey sound to be honest. If I were to think of a genre for hell, I would definitely think of a Heavy Metal / screamo song.

The main melody is kind of random as well. It does not really have a strong structure within it and to me the way this track is arranged, it seems like you rushed it. There were certain notes that sounded oddly strange, but I guess that's what makes this song seem mysterious. The percussion could use less pounding drums as well. It does not fit with the ambient sound you made, so I would consider that next time if you create a song something similar to this.

Try harder next time. This is a good start, so you are in the right path. Keep up the good work.

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mikkim responds:

This was not meant to be dark, because this is not the traditional image of hell... why don't people understand that?

Also, why is it that in a song that it is meant to be oddly strange, you take points away from it being oddly strange?

So really, the only problem is that the drums might be abit too pounding, but it isn't in my opinion... but yeah, that could be what you think of the drums.

Quite good, well produced

It's a nice moody tune but I don't think there's enough going on to warrant it being so long.
I would use this in a game, but if it was supposed to be Hell, then I'd add some whispering ghosts or something just to make it spooky rather than just moody.
Some kind of fire burning loop would also work.
I do really like the wobbly bass sound- if it tied in to something visual it would be well effective.
It is really nicely produced though- everything is well balanced with no clipping or anything.

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mikkim responds:

Except there is no fire or ghosts in this image of hell, but thanks!

Hell?

Idk about hells corridors. This reminds me of a game where you'd be creeping around maybe in a haunted place or a zombie infected deserted town, but hell? Okay, maybe, lol. Some parts seem to fit the description but the super quiet parts I don't really see as being hell. Anyway, to the track...

I think you did a really great job of capturing the quiet and creepy feeling with this, it sounds like a place where you would have evil ghosts for sure. Not something I'd voluntarily listen to again, but I wouldn't mind at all if somebody threw this in a creepy game - it would be perfect.

mikkim responds:

Yeah, I wasn't really aiming at the traditional image of hell... I was aiming for a creepier version of it.

It was good

but i think you should change the theme after a while, im just saying it would be even better than!

mikkim responds:

Ahh... What exactly did you mean? Did you mean I should change it in the song, or I should change the song after awhile. But thanks!

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3 min 49 sec

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