My review, your loop.
Your piano, strings and other instruments are all centered in terms of panning, and near the same frequency range/octave, and all have some level of reverb on them. These are all contributing to them all becoming very blurry with one another and sounding like they've lost a lot of definition.
Kick hass no oomph in its bass tones, the snare has no sharpness in the mid-high freqs, they could use compression to raise their attack and overall volumes.
The melody is somewhat interesting, but the muddiness and lack of dynamics on the piano make it sound rather flat. You should checkout some tutorials on mixing and begin a technical uphill climb.
Running around with a chainsaw
Great ....might have a fat lady at the end with a better chainsaw running back after you with a chainsaw riunign backwards at herself to you running with a chainsaw to you get the idea 1oop