ONly thing I could think of is that you might want to add even more intensity on bar four of your phrases, especially on the drop when the drums come in... maybe go nuts on a high frequency spazy beat or somethign.
Much better than I could do that's for sure, very nice job, and keep it up ^)^
Hey man, I agree totally that I should be putting more umph on that 4th bar section just before it kicks into the main chorus.
Be sure to check out the final version of this song soon to come! I think you will like the changes/additions.
oh SHIT SON
What program do you use? This is cool. I insta-5'ed it at 0:29. LOL.
haha thanks man. I just use FL Studio 8 with a number of plugins.
If you want to know good plugins to look for just gimme a PM and ill let you know.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.