I'll be straight, I'm not a fan of the slow minor scale bits (0:39-0:43) and (0:55-0:59), maybe use the blues scale, or mix the rhythm up a bit... it sounds too basic and not melodic enough...the fast runs are sick though.
Since you're layering track at a time, you might even want to double the guitar for fun and do some running thirds/sixths, a la Iron maiden.
Much talent here, looking forward to hearing you in the up coming guitar hero games ^^
this is just the sample im workin on the real song now but thanks man ill remember...thanks!
Quite awesaome somewhat better than some of the other submissions. but other than that. you should get someone to sing/write lyrics nd submit another version. ur good at this. mate
thanks man that means alot...