Originality 9: I can't help but try to remember where this melody is from?! Idk...if it is yours really impressive job.
Clarity 6: AHHHH, my speakers are crying! Turn down the volume on many things.
Diversity 8: Different sounds played throughout.
Effort 9: Sounds like you put some time into this.
Make the clarity better, and this will be better! Keep up the good work.