This strange mesh of sounds from the station was actually pretty entertaining. I never expected the sounds of the train station to be so intriguing...
My scruff with this piece is that only 1/5th of it actually seems to have music. I could hear a little within in the other sounds...but only a little. My suggestion to you would be to either have more music mixed in overall, or to just cut out the music completely and just have the sound effects. Also, I would add more sound effects to have a more diverse piece overall.
Or you can completely ignore everything I'm saying. What's most important is that you enjoy the song. :D
Overall, an interesting piece with great potential. Keep up the good work!
I'm glad you enjoyed and thanks, I'll see what I can do to it.