Y need to drop the dB like 5 points
It's alright but qite repedative and a little loud and needs to be droped 4-6dB. Also try to drop the foreground down a bit to alow the beat and background come out a bit. and get some lower brass in the fore ground to punch it up a bit more.
thats a really cool song, really realistic, as for the ending... i think it was fine the way it is but u could always have more. email me and tell me wut u used to create this.... and check out my songs as well when u get time
I tried to email you but It seems like you didn't answer
The background gets old
It's repetitive but it's not bad. It would probably be great for some situations.
WOW this is such a powerful song!
I would tell some tips on how to finish this but I can't because I don't know anything about this kind of music.(im sorry I couldn't have been a help to you)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.