Hey man this is absolutley awsome. I know you beamed with pride when you made this, and you should. No clue what other people's problems are with this. So much potential for a groovy flash. :)... well... man... this is just great. I found this cuz u were featured on the audio portal main page... somewhere at the top or something. Good thing too.
not bad i liked the drum intro.
for future references, please put more than "indeed" or "enjoy" that says "hey look im a n00b!"
A 6? yes still a 6
The beginning sounded very promising for a good techno/dance song, but then it got funky with the little organ thing, nothing wrong with that. Next some weird slide thing comes in, a little breakdown and then an arp, nice beat under it, nothing with that, the ending was somewhat sudden and bad. But what i think you did is take some of ur seperate projects and somewhat badly mix it all into a song. It's not that I don't like seperate themes getting mixed together (i do it myself) but they also should be able to support eachother this isn't really what i classify as a song but merely a little demo of some of ur projects and skills at making electronic music. If you have seperate projects and want to make them into 1 song make sure they fill in eachother in a parralel way and not simply switch them over into another.
You've got to be one of the more underated artists on newgrounds. This song is killer, and it seems like hardly anybody knows about it. I guess my only "criticism" is that you do what I do when I make music, you get bored easy so you move from one song style to the next in the same song.
People like me like it, but I get the feeling that most people don't.