But the rapping can really use some work, It's not hating or anything really! but alot of the times your not perfectly on beat.
I do hear that you got great flow, in ways of comparing you with other rappers on newgrounds you actually tell every 2 lines apart from the other.
Wich is good because of variation.
Another little detail is to really REALLY get your doubled vocals perfectly in sync with each other or just use one voice and try to phase it (if you have the options for it)
Yeah I've been working on getting my words right on beat lately. I'm pretty old school when it comes to recording so I don't edit my voice or anything. if I want to reverb something I just try and rap over it again haha maybe I'm too stubborn for my own good. Thanks for taking the time to write an awesome review man.
very nice d00d keep it up
Woah! Nice man!
Awesome rap man, I really enjoyed it!
I really like your choice of words.
Wish i had your skills man.
Oh and again, thanks for using my beat.
'Means a lot to me!
Added you as a favourite musician!
Hey man, thanks. The beat was so hot, I may even complete the whole track sometime.
Man, you're songs on just on another level these days. I feel like the theme of this song went great with the beat. Keep it up, brotha'.
Thanks dude. Glad to see you're still tunin' in.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.