Beat could be a lil louder but this aint a bad track.
Lyrics and hook esp is tight
You;ve got the clearest recordings Ive heard on this fucking site.
What kind of mic do you gots?
Ya got something!
The rhymes and lyricism are insane. The hook is catchy and relative to the overall feel to the entire track.
The only suggestion I'd have is on the abundent rhyme scheme. With so much variations of a rhyme word, it get a bit predictable. But it also sets a nice pace in the verses. You know?
Im liking what Im hearing, Ill keep an ear out for some new Jweed tracks.
Keep at it!
good lookin thanks man!
Its good, but you can tell your tying to hard. Plus you take A lot of lines from other people....
That whole enitire eminem "devil" line...
Add heart and youll be great......
One of the best things i could have leanred was this " Do what you know. Dont go trying to be something youe not"
Ok now to the chorus..... Sing it more .... put heart into it, and it would sound sick
Maybe we could colab one time......
Hit me up.......
You need more spirit. Rap with more rage, at least words rage more than your voice.
Like this fam. Love the hook. mabie lower the vocals a bit or bring the beat up. Lyrics are sick. Keep moving and youll go somewhere. hell yea. 5/5 10/10
Thanks man, I have such a hard time mixing this will help me for later appreciate it dude thanks for the insight
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.