I like your violin skills, you play pretty well.
But I think most people would prefer songs made of multiple instruments, as this sounds quite bland.
Maybe getting a DAW and combining instruments, (whether playing your violin live or using onboard synths and samples) will make this sound much better.
Thank you for the comments I really appreciate that.
good, but could be better.
Add a few more instruments. That will make it sound way better. That's all.
YES <<I GUESS , I HAVE TO ADD MORE INSTRUMENTS...>>
I BOW DOWN TO YOUR EPICNESS :)