On a side note, what Atomicon was doing was comparing your to other techno music. And that's not what being a judge is about.
For the song, I'd say just need a more holesome to it. Like theres nothing to hold on to. Like at 1:15 - 2:30, the lead was nice, drums ok, but the background it a bit simple and not all there.
At 2:30 when the high sound comes it. That was good but it had an edge to it that kinda hurt my ears. My be me but I'm saying it.
It sounds pretty generic, like basic techno. I'd try and use some more unique synth sounds if I were you, get more creative with drum sounds. The chords and arpeggios are OK.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.