haha
On a side note, what Atomicon was doing was comparing your to other techno music. And that's not what being a judge is about.
For the song, I'd say just need a more holesome to it. Like theres nothing to hold on to. Like at 1:15 - 2:30, the lead was nice, drums ok, but the background it a bit simple and not all there.
At 2:30 when the high sound comes it. That was good but it had an edge to it that kinda hurt my ears. My be me but I'm saying it.