I thought this was cool, but felt like you could of done more with the beat (like more fills/variations) other than that I like the originality of the melodie, cause it comes off as some thing that I think I have heard b4 but has this slight twist to it that at the same time makes it unique. I really could of seen this being some crunk hip hop/rap beat layed ontop of this for some reason but I think I love the half way point the most cause it was like woah wtf it came out of no were! kind of sounds like some video game music for some snes game intro lol.
The point of the song is to catch you off guard. I do agree that yes it does sound like an old video game, and the crunk might sound interesting on top of the original beat. Thank you for the review, and I will try to improve my songs in the future based on this