I dont like it too much, the only reason i gave it two stars is because of the melody was pretty good.
This piece is flowing, steady, soothing!
this is an awesome piano piece, very beautiful and moving. i really enjoyed it. however, near the end, it seemed like there were some off-key notes that clashed noticeably with the rest of the piece. other than that, the composition is amazing. Unfortunately the recording is pretty awful. Too much clipping. The car horn and other noises can't be helped obviously, but the clipping/muffling is just awful. Here's a tip - record with the input turned down and then boost the levels later. Also, I do believe that you used "Noise Removal" on this song, as I can hear the distortion. It would be better to leave noise in than to "damage" the music. You can experiment with the noise removal settings until you get an acceptable amount of noise removed without losing any of the music itself (or distorting it).
Finally, I would recommend that you not upload work that isn't your own. If your friends wrote and performed it, then it isn't yours to upload, regardless of whether or not you were given permission to do so. Moreover, the feedback you're given is meaningless because you aren't the one who did the work.
The piano sounds muffled thought the song, which is really to bad, as it has an excellent melody. Very impressive, especially considering this seems to be your first song on Newgrounds. It says your friends; Did you write the song, or just upload it?
its good. but needs work.
the melody is fantastic. but i can safely say the pitch in the high notes is way too high. overall a good piece. but perhaps a little less high pitch next time
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