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Maybe DnB-ish with house tempo :O

I dunno what it is xD But it's not finished, so tell me what you think and what I can improve :)

in the "break" at 2:45 I want a computer voice saying something xD, suggestions? :D

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Wouldn't call this dnb.

It has too much of a House beat and there aren't a lot of dnb elements in here. Speaking of the beat, the percussion seems too lack some punch. Perhaps add some stronger compression on them will help.

The track does seem to lack energy throughout the song, I'm not really sure what it is, but it just does. It may just be because of the weak mastering, or maybe you just need to have some more FXs placed in the background.

The bassline is sick, though it lacks some actual bass. Again, compression / EQing would solve this problem. The synths are alright as well, but they definitely get repetitive, maybe that's why it lacks energy? I'm really not sure what it is, but something seems to be missing in here.

The whole track seems to have a Halloween sound to me. If you work hard enough on it, you should submit it to the halloween contest ;) Overall, this has a good style and it has great potential. Keep at it.

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mjattie responds:

hmm weak mastering... I'm not very good at mastering... The middle part is a bit boring I know. Almost every instrument has compression already xD But when I upload the finished version it should be better mastered.

About the genre: I put it in house, but it has some DnB elements, that's all I said. xD


This is super weird, but in a good way. I'm not even sure I can think of any criticism to give you. I mean, it's certainly not boring, and doesn't seem to be lacking anything really. It's really different and cool sounding.

Around 2:00 you added some new sounds that sounded really good, and the build up and break was awesome. I totally agree with you on the computer voice though, lol. That would sound really cool. Maybe you can just make it say "break" or something simple like that. All in all definitely a cool and interesting song. Downloading this.

mjattie responds:

hahaha thanks xD you know, that's actually a very good Idea.. "Break" I actually might use that one haha.

thank you for the review!


Another cool song you maybe could make some more break's but a break at 2.45 could be cool. Nice song again!!!

mjattie responds:

thanks for the suggestion, if I make it longer I wil make more breaks, but I don't know if I'll make it longer :P

thanks a lot noah1234

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Sep 13, 2010
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