Wouldn't call this dnb.
It has too much of a House beat and there aren't a lot of dnb elements in here. Speaking of the beat, the percussion seems too lack some punch. Perhaps add some stronger compression on them will help.
The track does seem to lack energy throughout the song, I'm not really sure what it is, but it just does. It may just be because of the weak mastering, or maybe you just need to have some more FXs placed in the background.
The bassline is sick, though it lacks some actual bass. Again, compression / EQing would solve this problem. The synths are alright as well, but they definitely get repetitive, maybe that's why it lacks energy? I'm really not sure what it is, but something seems to be missing in here.
The whole track seems to have a Halloween sound to me. If you work hard enough on it, you should submit it to the halloween contest ;) Overall, this has a good style and it has great potential. Keep at it.
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