Ouch... ; - (
Yeah, I know it sucks to have a broken wrist. That flaw really made this song sound worse. Well, now that Christmas in 2005 has passed, you should be able to play this song the better way with a higher key, now that your wrist feels better now. You don't have to do this, but I think adding some drums should go nicely. Still, I agree with the guy below me that you're on your way to becoming a guitar champion, but the scale change from D major to C major doesn't work with me. You have to choose one of those. You can't put both of them in this song, unless you have a broken wrist, of course. Which one will it be? C major or D major? I suggest C major because that chord is more popular. Also, the guitar sounds soft, but due to your broken wrist, you can't play so loud. The off key rhythms don't harm the song to me. I think that makes it sound like a funky guitar from Hawaii! Usually, I give low scores to songs like this, but since you had a broken wrist, I make an exception and raise the score up to a 6. With my review, I should make the average score 5. That seems good enough. Keep trying so you can be as popular as the guy who made the best Super Mario Over world song.
You're on a good way, but there's alot to shape.
You have the skill to play, but you get off key at some places, you also play in two different scales. (you should know what i mean if you're musical)
well, in any case.. thanks for listening, and the constructive criticism will eventually come in handy, ive been struck down with a broken wrist and wont be able to play till at least dec. 25th, the origional smb overworld from what im aware of is played in a higher key, i played in a slightly lower one, that modulated... which i didnt entirly pick up on till after everything was said and done... well.. i beleive that covers about everything
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