I understand it was a "quick try", but...
I listened to the whole song, and while I believe this could've been much more promising, there's 2 major things that glared almost immediately.
1) Lack of mastering on instrument sound levels made it seem incredibly muddled at some points, to the point that you sometimes lost distinction of the melody among the other parts.
2) Some of the sound samples you used, particularly the percussion, were very poor quality, and very distracting.
If this were given a serious second-over with some better samples, this song would be excellent.
almost 7 minutes hahaha...great job with the song...sounds so happy and fun