i guess ill start with the mix--i think you overly compressed this. the beat sounds way too stifled, i guess in an effort to make it sound punchier on your part--but it really just makes the entire song sound smushed.
but besides that, the wobbly synth that plays throughout is pretty nice, and i like how you actively fuck around with it for variety. some details throughout were nice, too, liek background piddly synth that becomes apparent at :15.
i thought the melody, though, was kinda lame, and that some of the synths weren't very appropriate--for example, the chordal accompaniment that starts at :28 and ends at the beginning of the next section sounded kinda silly.
i personally dont have a probem with no new synths coming in for a while--i think you gave it enough variety already. but yeah, i guess i like the concept of the song, but partially the mix and the synth choices made me not latch onto it all too much. hope i helped!