Pretty Good :O
I like this. There are a few problems however. That first sound only stays on one side the entire time, if you panned it, it wouldn't be quite as annoying. Try to transition better from section to section as well. Lastly, add some sort of drums, they'll make it sound fuller.
The sounds are awesome though, keep it up. :D
thank you for the constructive criticism, i can assure you that your advice will help my songs grow into something better, thanks again
not sure what to say about it. at first i thought it was going to be some typical trance stuff but it just got more and more weird... i'm giving a score based on how interesting the sounds are.... i like where you went with it at 1:15.... nice sounds. want to hear more
thanks for the response, and on the record, i want to thank you for being the first person to comment on any of my songs, so thank you, and i can assure you that i will be working on more pieces