Very melodic and entrancing.
I like this a lot!
PLaying all sound loud sometimes makes you loose detail. Like at 0:59
But that is just a small technicallity
A tip i have for you try to make your own apreggios that would make this even better!
Please retrun the favor on my new song: Angelina
It could use some brushing up on the arrangement of the track, but overall the composition is great. Work on a better climax and give the track a good conclusion (not one that ends so abruptly). It has potential to be very good, though.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.