this ain't too bad at all
I would've added some reverb and softened that click-click-clicking drum thing you got going on... It sounds out of place to me in its current form.
However, halfway through the song got better.
Not bad; keep up the good work and keep an ear out for things that stick out like a sore thumb.
I'll do my best, thank you!
Should I submit a reworked version of this track?
The bass during the first half eventually wore itself out a little, and when it came back. I really liked the part with the light drums, though. Good melody too.
Thanks for a review!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.