At the intro, the synth is way too loud, and overshadows the sax. Also Its a bit too long, for too little development, and the mix is really crowded, but EQ on the slap bass would take care of most of that. Honestly, percussion would move this track along nicely, and even make the crowdedness of the mix work in your favor. Almost in a jazzy dubstepish way. If you are aiming for this track to be a bit more ambient and percussion independent, then try less percussive sounding instruments. I would love to hear this at its potential!
nice bass!!! but this song needs more action! needs drums!! :D n.n
1) Increase the tempo...this should be on par with the original.
2) Splice and "jitter" your piece at 1:30 - 1:52 for a much added effect! Repeat as needed :)
That is all :)
The bass in this remix is a nice touch!! nicely done!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.