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Sep 8, 2010 | 8:03 PM EDT
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4.4 MB
3 min 50 sec
4.18 / 5.00

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Rated 4.18 / 5 stars
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Electronic - Trance

Author Comments

This took me quite awhile to get just the way I wanted it to sound. I know I'm not really a veteran of Fl Studio, but tell me what you think :). I think I spent about two months finishing it (not straight, just coming back to it every once in a while). But, it is my fist full song so go easy on me criticizers :D




Rated 5 / 5 stars

Well Done

I am extremely impressed by this piece, not because of it's sound, but because of the way you set it up - you composed it. I'm unsure if you know how perfectly this song fits the progressive trance genre! Now, since this is your first song, I won't criticize you like I would a pro. Your instrument selections were pretty basic, but this only impressed me more because you improvised so well!

You truly have a future in this art, miss Starr! I look forward to listening to your future projects, and would be honored if we collaborated later on! A few tweaks here and there will place you on the same tier as 808 State or NG's Envy! If you'd like, I could help you out on some minor issues that will achieve this.

Your NG comrade,

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Mechwarrior300 responds:

I'm flattered :). I had no idea it was as good as people are saying it is! I doubt I'll ever be as renowned as Envy or Paragon, but I'm happy that you think I have potential. I'd love to collab sometime.



Rated 5 / 5 stars

This is great

Kudos on a wonderful piece of music. I just put up my first full length song - in a very different style - it's a bit daunting isn't it? Waiting to hear if anyone even bothers to listen to it and what they might say.
For you, I wouldn't worry, you rock. This piece is well conceived and executed, it builds nicely has great transitions and a nice consistent pace. How many tracks or layers do you have going here?
Keep it up!

Mechwarrior300 responds:

Thanks :) Yes it is very unnerving finding out how you compare to the rest of NG lol. I think I have between 70 and 75 different sequences (none of them layered). And the main synths you hear at like 2:21 and 2:35 I had to spend 2 hours creating from basically scratch :D

Anyways I'll go ahead and listen to your song if you'd like!



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Your first??

Usually, a person's first song is kind of bad. But this... is actually decent!
I mean, its not exactly like it can become the top few songs of newgrounds, but it's decent enough to be put on an mp3 player..
I just find the synths kind of sound the same, so there isn't much variety in the song.
I think you kind of overloaded the bass too, maybe you should lower it a bit by eqing the song a bit.
Still, it's unbelievable that this is your first song.

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Mechwarrior300 responds:

Lol Thanks :D! Actually I did use the same synthesizer for all the melodies. I kinda wanted to give the song the same tone (and also I was too lazy to spend another hour creating another instrument). As for the bass, I think I'm in love with low sounds so I'm sorry if it overpowered everything else :)



Rated 5 / 5 stars


Lol I better get ur autograph now before you become famous!

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Mechwarrior300 responds:

Lol it's not all that great but thanks anyway :)



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Outstanding for a first song!

Outstanding even for a veteran lol.

I'm in love with the bass synth at 0:49 and the synth at 2:20! Is that a preset instrument or did you make it yourself???

And the transition at 1:03 won my heart away! Great job.


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Mechwarrior300 responds:

I made it myself :) and thanks!!