Damn good

I would definatly like to see this finished, it has a lot of potential, contray to some of the others, I don't think that a bass line is need. The drums could you more emphasis

This reminds me of someone.

This distinctly reminds me of Crueldiety. Really, I'm being honest, he's pretty beast at electro-space-ambient metal like this, of which, this song also is pretty dang awesome in it's own respects, dude, like seriously lol.

I just love the flow of the lead and the rythm when momentum pick up. I also like how there's this strangely absent-sounding reverb stemming off of the rythm guitar, maybe some sort of reverb or something, but I love it dude.

I also like the vibraphone, or xylophone, or whatever you used in the intro, it fit perfectly in with the song, sitting with the chorus and the licks riding right off the lead, those notes were just sweet, I wish you'd tab something like that out for me along with the effects you used! Haha, yeah, how funny Ryan. :P

Anyway, the tone on that rythm is just domination, really. I think there could be more volume to this track, like add more highs and mids to the cymbals, and, honestly, bring everything out in the drums more by EQ. I had the same problem with my drums tending to sound flat. I reccomend highs for cymbals, high-mids for the snares, and low-lows for the toms and bass kick, I bassically followed that formula and most peeps dig my drums.

BUT, this doesn't suck. It needs a little bit of tweeking in my opinion, of course other things could be EQ'd more, since when you do that, it increases the volume of an instrument, maybe bring out the ones you have a bit more, that's all I'm saying. :)

Either way, I love the melody of this song, it's great, if this wasn't a loop, I'd reccomend it to be longer. :P

yea... something does suck here...

WHERES THE BASS SOUND???? turn it up...somethings wrong lol. otherwise, it sounds awesome : )