Not bad at all.
It feels a bit on the empty side though. You should try balancing and EQ'ing the instruments to keep them from overshadowing each other. For example, the drums could be a bit softer and the melody and bass brought out. also don't be afraid to use some more chords to keep it from being too redundant. But I did like the ambient tones you used. I also admire the fact you play the keyboard parts yourself. I still haven't figured how to get that to work smoothly on my computer.
Thanks! This isn't the quite finished version, I'm going to change some of the drum samples. For example, the bass drum isn't the final drum I want. I'll add some chords too when I figure out which chords to use. XD
I'll try to balance the instruments more. :D
To record, I use a Line 6 UX2 recording device and Ableton, I had no problems at all with lag or anything. You should try it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.