Absolutely flawless. Smooth metaphors and strong rhymes.
To PayneDeath, the song isnt too fast, your brain is just too slow!
Haha, thanks a lot!
Well the song is OK...
This song is too fast though..
Can you please send me this song without the lyrics ?
Done. Make sure you credit me if you use it, please.
keep going its life. you got the right idea.
INA MOMENT, ACT 1 - 1 - 1
When I listen to Hip Hop I pay most of my attention to the lyrics, and this is a true Hip Hop song, because it's about substance rather than material. Your flow really went with the song and the lyrics. The mixture of a peaceful background with the glitchy/broken beat felt sorta awkward but it was unique. I still enjoyed listening to the song. The greatest aspect of this song is definitely the message, and more people should look at music this way.
Thanks a lot man, I totally agree. Without the meaning, hip hop wouldn't exist. It's a very true form of expression. Thanks for the detailed critique. :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.