So I'm happy with the song. It really flows, and I like the pacing. Mixing and mastering could be better, but it's not horrible. I like the elements that come in later on in the song.
Just realised it's four and a half minutes. Jesus. May need to make a shorter version. Nevertheless, please listen to it all.
Let me know what you think, and how I can improve it :)
EDIT: I'm pretty sick of zero-bombers ruining my chances of people listening to my music. If you're looking at this, give it a chance; don't assume it sucks yet.
Not my style.... but!
It's decent. I got down to the intro, as well as the ending. Everything in between was a little.... slow? That's just my music preference chiming in though. I mean, it is definitely a peaceful song, you hit the mark on your objective for sure. A for effort and ability.
Thanks for the review :)
Yeah, it's really long. That's probably why it seems so slow. Plus the style mustn't have helped, like you said.
I'm glad you could still find good in it though. It's really good that there are people on newgrounds that can be unbiased when listening to stuff.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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