better than before
i don't quite recall what the first one had going for it, but as far as this one goes, its pretty good. it still lacks a theme though.
your transitions are better i think, but the song itself is still pretty much the same all the way through. your variations are not distinct enough. it seems to me like you're trying to produce a song before dreaming the dream first. you have to have the completed puzzle in your mind innitially, and then make the pieces and put it together. i feel that you suffer from this (common) problem because your composition is very abstract, and like i said before, lacking in distinction and theme.
please don't be discouraged though, you clearly have the ability. stick with it, and figure out what you want to do before you do it.