Great entrence

I like how at the beginning there was the cell phone ringing. Not many people do that any more where they start out the song with a sound effect instead of the actual song. You dared to be different which really got to me.

Then it got to this really funky beat. Great melody with that. It was really interesting to listen to. My mind couldn't keep up with it. The song was amazing. I was tapping my foot at the end of the bed and after the song was over I listened to it again which I do rarely with audio requests.

Overall song was great. No improvements but if the song was longer I would of liked that. I don't know how you were working with this song but maybe making it longer would of reduced the quality.

I added this into my favorites.

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5/10

Sorry for the low rating, but nothing really stands out in this to me. It seems so unoriginal and trendy. It just sounds waaay too generic for my liking. You should add some personality and maybe some fades in here, or just anything really. Maybe that's just me, but it's my opinion...

I don't really think the beginning of this is appropriate for a trance track either. After the radio part, the way you built up was cool - and I did like that part - but after that it was just one loud trendy trance noise with zero character.

Interesting.

Sounds more like Dutch Trance than actual techno, because the song progresses all the way through, and doesn't really have a strong climax. You don't have to change the genre though, Techno is just fine ;)

You need to work on your mix and synth sounds. That's what brought down my score a whole lot. Keep the levels a lower than -3db, and makes sure none of your synths are clipping. I would like to hear a more thumping bass line too, the one you had was kind of generic. The percussion was alright though, nothing really needs to be added for it.

Keep up the good work, you got potential.

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