My head doesn't play such songs...strange
haha but thanks for the good conmment
This song is pretty good.
But I find the synths a bit too repetive. Maybe you'd like to use different melodies, and maybe fade synths in and out.
Also, I notice you are using a really common chord progression. If you use it, try to make a good melody to go with it, rather than basing your melody on that progression.
Also, adding some drums would be nice. =) Especially since you call this a 'dance drum.' Try giving this a 4 on 4 kick. It'll sound nicer. And add some bass too.
This is a pretty decent song to me, I look forward to seeing your other songs.
thanks for your onesty
sorry bad englich