Needs work, but good progress

Yeah, I have to agree that there seems to be an issue with trying to get the backing vocals to fit with your voice - try asking for assistance from the voice actors on the Audio Forum and see where you go from there? Raw songs, without backing vocals would help, so that the artists can give you their versions and you can edit as you see fit.

I think that it's a decent track, but it needs some work - possibly a little more in the way of the guitar? Have you got any bass in there at all, because that could be what you're missing and it does make such a big difference to the sound of the track.

Can you please print the lyrics on the comments next time, as I can't understand them. If I could sing along, I might be able to feel a closer affinity with the track.

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