Okay so Genre - I would put this in the techon section. There is not much drum n bass in it.
Ways to improve it - Not a whole lot to say here! The only thing I thought was dragged on in this is the intro build up. maybe a little shorter next time? but thats just me, some other people might disagree.
Overall - I really enjoyed it. It is different in its own way and it is nice to hear something orginal. Keep up the good work man!
Thanks man, ill be sure to notify you when i finish the song.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.