The loop isn't bad but the quality just kills it.You should really make it a lot louder.If you could it would be a decent loop.
Still not good enough!
Ok, if I turn my volume up high now I can hear the loop, but it is still to quiet.
I don't know what kind of program you use for recording and mixing, but get some tutorials for modifying your amplitude.
The loop is ok, maybe the riffs could sound a little more varied. Try to change them a little. Overall it could be ok, if it was louder.
Only can give you 1/5 for this, sry man. Hope you don't get me wrong.
thanks for the review...I will try harder next time