Not too shabby
This has the potential to be better than it is. Not to say it's bad, it's actually pretty decent.
My biggest complaint is that the percussion is too loud, it overpowers the rest of the track and I feel takes away from the overall feel of it all.
That aside, I think the synths are a tiny bit loud as well, as well as being kind of dry and lifeless... Spice them up a bit, maybe add a bit of chorus/reverb, give them life!
A little panning would also help bring the soul out of this, nothing huge, but having everything right on the center can detract from the overall immersion of the piece.
That aside, I could see this becoming something great.
This has been a return review from yours truly! Keep up the good work!
The name of the song is Lux Aeterna....
But that's not the reason I'm 6'ing this.
The idea was there, and could have been very good, but there were some things working against you. The beat for this song is just too simplistic, and it was patterned in a way that didn't flow well with the song at all. Additionally, the synths that came in at :48 were rather loud and harsh sounding.
Work on making a more coherent beat pattern, and lower the volume on your synths a bit, and this song will sound much better.
i agree the beat kinda sucked, but the harsh syncs were supposed t obe, it was meant to be rough sounding
thanks for the reply, helpfull comments are rare these days
it was a lil off the original is epic so takking it on has balls so im votin 5 any way
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