Treviabot92 - Elysiumt

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One guy who reviewed my original cover suggested I add a little more oomph to my drums. So, that's what I did. I also extended the length of the song and modified the guitars.



what a fantastic song this is, it's so excellent and awesome and full of excellence. Actually it's not any of those things. Like always your music sucks, you suck and people who review your music suck. Nice job extending the length of the song, now if you could only extend the length of your dick you might have a full 4 inches to work with. Ladies love a man-blob with a tiny penis... But I digress, you often criticize me for going off topic so let me tell you that the drums were off, the guitar was off and the bass was off. By off of course I mean you're extremely gay.

I hope you enjoyed reading this as much as I did writing it!!! :) :) :)

Treviabot92-Virstein responds:

First off, you didn't listen to the song. Second off, you have a dirty mind. Third off, I like my six-inch penis the way it is, thank you very much.

I'm flattered

I'm kind of flattered that you went and revamped your song after I reviewed it, which is what is sounds like you did unless I am mistaken and being very egotistical.

ANYWAY. I like the small variation sections you added to the guitar part. It changes things up a little bit and I like it. It is still catchy and I like the melody.

About the drums. I do like that you made them a little stronger in this version. However, I'm not sure I'm a big fan of how they sound. I really like how they sound in the beginning, it really gives the song a driving feeling and adds a lot of energy.

After that, going into the first little variation section, the bass drum started to sound a little clicky and uneven. Maybe that was my speakers or the snare coming through. There seems to be a lot of emphasis on either the downbeat or the upbeat, I couldn't really tell which it was. The snare drum also seems to fade into the background in the second half and is kind of muffled by everything else.

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Treviabot92-Virstein responds:

I can see why you say that about the drums. It's hard to make them sound good without drowning everything else out. Another revision, then!...After a different song.

Also, yes, I did follow your previous review. I really appreciated that. And I appreciate this one.

Nice melodies dude =]

I gotta say I like it. =]

Bad: Too repetitive maybe? When all the guitars are together the sound sounds drowned.

Good: Nice interesting riffs and use of delay, and interesting use of the kick drum to give the sense of mah old heart racing.

Hehe Good work!

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Treviabot92-Virstein responds:

Yeah, ok, uh...What can I say? I'm not very original, never have been.

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Credits & Info

3.74 / 5.00

Aug 31, 2010
2:17 AM EDT
General Rock
File Info
7 MB
5 min 5 sec

Licensing Terms

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* Cover / remake of a third-party piece.
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