Not bad at all, but...
It's a very well put together piece, but I think the main drawback is that it feels very flat. A stronger undercurrent of bass might have added some dimension to it and given it more "presence". I get the sense of what you were going for I think, and it's supposed to be a more dramatic piece than what it is. Also, bringing some better timed guitar work with a lesser emphasis on synth guitar would do a lot to make the piece really impress. All in all, a very enjoyable listen, and definitely going on my PMP.
Thanks! Ok great. I see what you're saying with the lack of identifiable bass. You're right that I was going for a more a dramatic piece, though it usually ends up falling flat, like you said. The bass angle helps for sure. As far as the guitar goes, seems like I'll have to learn to play it, ha. Thanks for the constructive criticism!
pretty cool sounding,
has a nice sound to it all,
i kinda get bored of it after a while,
but this being a video game track, i think it sounds great
Thanks! What part do you get bored at? Any suggestions or advice? Something I can change perhaps?