Also too short
~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this one is ok, but its way too short, i know its a {LOOP} but still seems like it should be longer and its still way too short in variaty you could add a number of sounds and other sound/fx aswell as some other and new including {UNIQUE} instrament sounds, this would give that variaty, to it and then also making it longer would just give you better results, anyways nice job hope to hear more from you soon.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some more variaty, and new sounds could make this longer