I realy liked the song
This brought back memories of fighting the shevens (bad spelling). Any ways the song could use... hmm I think...I think it is almost perfect (to me at least). I know that is not much help but it's the best I can do. I hope you can do more freespace music.
I'm defiantly watching you, I hope to see great things from you, and all you have to do is your best.